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Saying Goodbye

I love you
far too much
and that is why I must go.

I can't stand another day
waiting for you to change.

I can't bear another day
waiting for the old you.

when I know it just won't happen.

It kills me inside
to know I may never see you again.

But It's my own fault.
I got too close.
I said too much.
I held on too long.

I should have known
I had to goodbye.
From the heart with honesty.
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asleepnthechapl Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
Girl... When someone says they know exactly what you mean that would be an understatement to this poem. This spoke directly to my heart and my last relationship<3
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Blazeingstar Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
The best kind of poetry is the kind
that comes from one heart and speaks for another, I think.
Poetry means nothing if other's don't feel it's emotion,
and it means even more if other can directly relate.
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asleepnthechapl Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
I completely agree with that statement. Poetry that speaks to the heart is the only true poetry there is<3
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Blazeingstar Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes indeed.
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vintagecove Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
WOW! LOVE IT ;)
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Blazeingstar Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks.
It was a difficult moment for me.
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Oboogie3000 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010
The last 5 lines could be a poem all on their own!!! Good!
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Blazeingstar Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks a million.
[:
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Oboogie3000 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010
You are ALWAYS welcome! :highfive:
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Brighteyed-AL Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How did you get the rainbow on the side?
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